Up on a hill on Wailuku Drive
Two boys on a bicycle fly by
Cousin on the handle bars
Me on the seat
Both boys cursing each other through their teeth
Ninety degree turn up head
Take it back, cousin I said
You take it back you freak
Both of us screaming ‘take it back’
While flying down the street
I’m not slowing down this bike
Until you apologize to me
You started it by popping a wheely
Too late now
Controlled crash it has to be
Sliding off the road into banana trees
All bloodied up with torn clothes
We left the broken bike in the groves
But off to work we still go
Both of us limping on opposite sides of the road
Flipping each other off as we moan and groan
I take it back cousin
There, I said it
It wasn’t right
Me popping the wheely
While you weren’t holding on tight
I know we laughed about it that night
But twenty years later
Ha, I beat you again
I said “I take it back” first
Got you again
Thank you cousin
You’ve been a great friend
Thank you for your kind words. I hadn’t thought of it like that, but I really appreciate it. Wow! I have a style! 🙂
I’m feeling your style ken.
People can rant and rave, fill papers with paragraphs and not say much of anything.
Here you are capturing an emotion, a thought, a stirring of memories with a pocket change amount of words.
Keep it up
Me too.
Great..reminder yup i love my cousins..well most of them..